After the Pardon — Reading Notes

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Serao, Matilde, 1856-1927 Project Gutenberg 2015 Not confirmed
Adultery -- Fiction; Man-woman relationships -- Fiction; Marriage -- Fiction; Italian fiction -- Translations into English; Rome (Italy) -- Social life and customs -- Fiction Readers of public-domain and historical texts
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Words 73,419
Reading time 320 min
Text sections 8

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Matilde Serao's novel uses precise diction and dialogue to trace a marriage strained by adultery and a pardon that fails to restore intimacy. The excerpts reveal a protagonist who reads alone, a husband who 'pardoned' but remains distant, and a suitor whose persistence is dissected with cold clarity.
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as reading alone, and the slow rustling of the pages, which she turned with a gentle movement, alone broke the silence of the room.

The tiny clock on a small table at her side tinkled clearly, striking half-past nine. Donna Maria started slightly, gave a rapid glance at the clock, and, from a long habit of solitude, said to herself almost aloud--

“Always later, always a little later.”

Suppressing a sigh of impatience, and shrugging her beautiful shoulders, she resumed her reading. Her fine sense of hearing told her that outside in the hall the lock of the front door was rattling, and a slight blush rose to her cheeks and forehead.

A servant knocked at the door, entered without waiting for a reply, and silently offered the evening papers on a tray. She took them and placed them on the small table, scarcely bestowing a glance on him as he withdrew discreetly. Then, all of a sudden, a kind of spasm of grief, of anger and of annoyance, contracted her pure countenance, and with a half-angry, and yet suppressed cry, she exclaimed--

“How annoying! How annoying!”

The book fell down. Donna Maria arose, exposing her tall, lithe figure, full of noble grace. The harmony of a body not slender but comfortably covered, added to the pleasing maturity of thirty years, undulated in the silk dress with a slight rustling as she went to the balcony, and lifting the heavy lace curtains looked through the clear glass into the street.

The majestic piazza of Santa Maria Maggiore stretched before her eyes as far as the steps of the great basilica with its lofty closed doors, while the vastness of the piazza and the architectural grandeur of the temple were bathed on that June night by the soft brightness of the moon. The passers-by were few and scattered, little black shadows cast on the roads and footpaths of the square. Then an electric tram, coming from the via Cavour, crossed the square, desecrating for a moment the Roman scene, where faith and the Church had placed one of their most enduring and ancient manifestations, and suddenly disappeared into the other artery of the via Cavour.

The woman gazed at that almost deserted space, at the immense solitary church, rendered cold by the light of the moon, and the solitude of her desolate spirit and desolate heart became more profound and intense.

“Maria,” said a voice at her shoulder.

She turned suddenly. The young man who had called her took her two hands and kissed them one after the other with tender gallantry, and while she bent her head with a smile he kissed her eyes with a soft caress.

“It is a little late,” he said, excusing himself.

“It wants a quarter of an hour to ten,” replied Maria precisely. He looked at his watch and added--

“Perhaps your watch is fast?”

“Perhaps,” she replied, as if to break off the discussion.

She sat down, and the young man, taking a low chair, his usual seat, placed himself beside her. Taking her hand loosely he began to play a little with her fingers, toying distractedly with the rings with which they were loaded.

“ ..._m’aimes_?” said Maria, in an almost childish French fashion, but in a voice without tone or colour.

“ ..._t’aime_,” he replied childishly, and rather perfunctorily. Having, as it were, accomplished a small preliminary duty of conversation they were silent.

She looked at him, and noticed that he was in evening dress, and in his buttonhole were some carnations which she had given him in the morning. Marco Fiore’s slightly delicate appearance was aided by these garments of society. His person gained freedom from a certain thinness more apparent than real. His face was a little too pallid, with deep-black hair and moustaches; the lips were fresh and strong. The eyes, which were extremely soft, with a fascinating softness, had every now and then something feminine in them. But there was nothing feminine in the gleams of passion which kept crossing them in waves, nor was there anything feminine in the generality of the lines, where firmness and even obstinacy were prominent. Two or three times, to break the silence, he kissed her slender fingers.

“Are you going out, Marco?” she asked in that decided voice of hers, which required a precise and direct reply.

“Yes, for a moment or two.... I am obliged to,” Marco insinuated.

“To the English Embassy, Maria.”

“Is there a reception?”

“Yes, the last of the season,” he explained, as if to clear up his obligation for going.

Again there was a silence. Maria sat with her two jewelled hands clasped over her knees among the silken folds of opaque silver, as if in a dream.

The novel opens with Donna Maria Guasco Simonetti reading alone, surrounded by cushions 'of all kinds of fabrics and colours,' a lamp casting 'opalised' light on her chestnut hair. The description dwells on textures—sheenless silver silk, fleecy lace, gold cloth shoes—establishing a world of refined domesticity. Yet the silence is broken only by the rustle of pages and a clock striking half-past nine. Maria starts slightly and murmurs, 'Always later, always...' The sentence trails off, hinting at a habitual solitude that frames the story.

Serao’s authorial choices in diction and description foreground interior states through external detail. Maria’s composed mouth 'without smile but without bitterness' suggests a deliberate emotional withholding. The opening tableau—a woman reading, alone, in a room of soft luxury—immediately signals a central tension between surface composure and unspoken currents.

Dialogue as Dissection

The excerpted dialogue between Maria and Gianni Provana reveals Serao’s method of using conversation to expose power dynamics. Provana presses Maria for a reaction: 'You can’t bear me, isn’t it so?' She replies with monosyllables—'No,' 'Perhaps,' 'You are mistaken'—until he forces her to admit he is 'indifferent.' The word lands like a verdict. Provana’s response—'The worst you could have told me you have told'—shows how Serao lets a single word carry emotional weight.

Maria’s subsequent analysis of his motives is strikingly clinical: 'a question of self-love... you have begun to suffer because you can’t succeed with me.' She dissects his passion as a reflex of wounded vanity. The dialogue avoids melodrama; instead, it proceeds through logical escalation. Provana’s physical gestures—removing his monocle, kissing her hand—are noted but not dramatized. Serao prioritizes the verbal duel over sentimental cues.

The Grammar of Indifference

Serao’s narrative voice often mirrors Maria’s detachment. When Provana asks if Emilio is 'an impassioned lover, an enamoured husband, and a tender friend,' Maria replies: 'None of these things... An enemy perhaps.' The triplet of expected roles is dismantled in two short sentences. The word 'perhaps' leaves room for ambiguity, but the structure is decisive.

Notice how Serao handles the concept of pardon. Maria says, 'He has pardoned me, yes. He has pardoned me, but nothing more.' The repetition of 'pardoned' underscores the gap between the act and its emotional reality. The phrase 'nothing more' becomes a refrain. Later, Maria states: 'I am humiliated and humiliate myself every day... But I can’t tell him to love me; neither does he ask it of me.' The parallel clauses—'I can’t tell him... neither does he ask'—create a stalemate. Serao’s syntax enacts the impasse.

Objects as Emotional Markers

Serao invests objects with psychological weight. Maria’s initial reading is accompanied by a 'tiny clock' that 'tinkled clearly,' marking time in a room where nothing else stirs. The clock reappears as a cue for her habitual solitude. Later, when Provana stays after others leave, Maria 'took a book with uncut leaves from a table, looked for a paper-knife, and, having found it, with the peculiar noise of cut paper, occupied her beautiful hands.' The action—cutting pages—is a deliberate avoidance of engagement. The 'peculiar noise' draws attention to the act itself, making it a performance of indifference.

The gold cloth shoes that 'peeped out' in the opening scene are 'slightly peculiar and bright, the caprice of a lady in her own home.' This detail, seemingly minor, hints at a private self that contrasts with the composed exterior. Serao uses such objects to suggest layers of personality that dialogue alone does not reveal.

Voice and Silence in the Excerpts

The excerpts are dominated by Maria’s voice—measured, analytical, often self-aware. She speaks in complete sentences, rarely interrupted. When Provana says 'Alas, it is no supposition!' she cuts him off: 'Let us not speak of love... My greedy ears are satiated with it.' The metaphor of satiation ('greedy ears') is both vivid and distancing. She treats love as a discourse she has exhausted.

Yet silence also speaks. The foreword (by F.F.) describes the novel as showing 'how their passions force them beyond all laws and duties,' but the excerpts show characters who are acutely controlled. Maria’s pauses—'Always later, always...'—and Provana’s bitten lip suggest emotions that language cannot fully contain. Serao’s dialogue often leaves the unsaid as important as the said, creating a texture of restraint.

Readers attentive to Serao’s craft will notice how she builds tension through small verbal and physical details—a clock, a paper-knife, a hand kissed a moment too long. The excerpts offer a concentrated study of a marriage after crisis, where pardon has become a word without emotional force. The novel’s interest lies not in plot events but in the slow, precise erosion of intimacy through language and gesture.

There’s a weight in reading alone after a pardon that never quite reaches the other person, and that ache stayed with me long after After the Pardon. It made me think of how Love's bitterest cup — Inside the Classic holds that same quiet distance, the cold clarity of a love that survives its words but not its warmth. I still feel it sometimes.

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