The Queen of Farrandale: A Novel — Reading Notes
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“No, about your sister Carol.”
“Good old Carol?” said the boy with surprise.
“Yes. How much more time have you before you must go back to the store?”
Hugh looked at his wrist watch. Its dilapidated leather bracelet matched the carelessness of its owner’s general appearance. “Half an hour.”
“Then let us eat quickly and get to some quiet spot.”
They found it in a hotel lobby on the way to Hugh’s place of business, and in transit John Ogden took further mental note of his companion’s shabbiness. Not only were his clothes in need of brushing, but he had not shaved to-day; his shoes were dusty and by industry the boy finished several cigarettes before, in the hotel lobby, they found a couple of neighboring chairs, and he lighted another.
“Hard luck to tote you around this way, Mr. Ogden, but all I’ve got is a hall bedroom in a hash house.”
“You talk a lot about luck, don’t you?” remarked the older man. “You don’t look as if you had ever gone after it very hard.”
“Oh, yes,” responded Hugh; “I’ve batted around considerable after jobs.”
“You don’t keep them very long, eh?”
“No, and the devil can take them for all me. I’ve never had anything worth keeping since I got back from France. I care for nobody and nobody cares for me. That’s about the size of it, and most of the other fellows are the same way. My friends are all Bolshevists.”
“Oh, come now,” said the older man, regarding the frank young ne’er-do-well with some disgust, “that isn’t worthy of your father’s son.”
“Perhaps not; but what do you care?” turning upon his well-dressed, well-groomed companion; nettled by the shade of contempt in his tone. “My father’s dead and that’s the end of him.”
“I was going to tell you why I care,” said Ogden, meeting the inimical look in the exceedingly handsome blue eyes bent upon him. He paused a minute, then added, “I am glad I stopped over and hunted you up. You remind me of her.”
“Oh, yes,” said Hugh listlessly, “Carol. You said something about Carol.”
“I did,” returned the other quietly. “Twelve years ago to-day I asked her to be my wife.”
“_You_—Carol?” The boy’s voice was so incredulous that Ogden smiled.
“Yes; I wasn’t always forty-two, you know. I was thirty then, and she was eighteen.”
“That was the reason you hung around father, then?”
“One of the reasons, yes,” said Ogden slowly. “She was a sober little head for eighteen, and it was largely because for years she had had to be a mother to her little brother.”
The tone and manner in which this was said caused Hugh to remove his cigarette for a thoughtful moment. “Good old Carol,” he said; then, restoring the cigarette, he added, “I wish to thunder she had married you. That guy Morrison carried her off to Colorado. She hated to leave me like the devil. She wrote me every day while I was over there.”
“Don’t light another cigarette, Hugh,” exclaimed the other in irrepressible impatience. “Don’t you know you never will hold a position if you’re one of these coffin-tack slaves?”
Hugh flared up. The flare showed in his beautiful eyes and darkened them to violet. Who was this glass of fashion to dictate to a decent Bolshevist like himself!
“And don’t I tell you I don’t give a damn how many dinky positions I lose?” he retorted.
Ogden put a soothing hand on the boy’s big arm and was nervously shaken off. “I’m sorry, old man. Don’t take it that way. Of course you’re free, white, and twenty-one; but I can’t help taking an interest in you.”
“Better cut it. I thank you, of course, for looking me up”—Hugh rose—“but I’ve got to trot along now. Good luck to you.”
John Ogden rose, too. “It won’t be good luck for me unless I see you again. I’m staying at this hotel. Come to dinner with me to-night.”
“Oh, no. Thank you just the same, but I’ve no togs decent to dine in a place like this.” The boy was somewhat touched by the older man’s invitation and manner, and he smiled grudgingly, revealing perfect teeth and more than ever causing Ogden a twinge of memory. “I can dress for a dinner of Reds in some cellar. That’s my size.”
The novel opens with a scene in a noisy near-beer joint, where Hugh Sinclair, a young war veteran, meets John Ogden, an older family friend. The setting—a cheap restaurant with a brazen automatic piano—immediately establishes Hugh's rootlessness and the social gulf between the two men. Burnham uses the contrast between the clattering piano and the quiet hotel lobby they later seek to signal shifts in mood and conversation. Throughout the excerpts, such movement between public and private spaces recurs: from the restaurant to the hotel, from Ross Graham's store to Miss Frink's home. These transitions often coincide with revelations about character or plot, as when Ogden's casual mention of Hugh's sister Carol triggers a chain of memories and suspicions.
The Weight of a Name
The name 'Carol' appears repeatedly, functioning as a kind of emotional lodestone. Hugh's sister Carol is first mentioned in the opening chapter, and later Miss Frink, upon hearing the name, reacts with 'unconscious fixedness' and the thought 'His mother's name was Carol.' This echo suggests a hidden connection between the two women. Burnham does not explain the link immediately; instead, she lets the name accumulate significance through repetition. The reader is left to piece together the relationships from fragments of dialogue and internal reflection. This technique of delayed revelation, where a single word carries backstory, is typical of the novel's method of building suspense through everyday language.
Letters and Telegrams as Plot Engines
Written messages drive key plot developments. Hugh receives word of his sister's husband's death via a letter; Ogden's letter of introduction to Ross Graham sets Hugh on a new path; and a telegram later disrupts the household. Burnham treats these documents as physical objects that alter relationships. When Miss Frink learns of Hugh's mother's name, the knowledge comes not from a face-to-face confession but from Ogden's offhand remark. The novel thus privileges indirect communication—letters, telegrams, overheard conversations—over direct confrontation. This reliance on written or reported information creates a sense of distance and misdirection, as characters often learn crucial facts secondhand.
Miss Frink's Unreliable Intuition
Miss Frink describes herself as 'uncanny,' claiming her feelings are like an X-ray that reveals hidden truths. Yet her certainty is repeatedly undercut. She stiffens mechanically when Ogden mentions Carol, and later she admits she would not have helped Hugh if asked directly. Her intuition leads her to suspect Mrs. Lumbard, but she also acknowledges her own prejudice: 'I know the whole truth about you,' she tells Ogden, though she has just learned only fragments. Burnham uses Miss Frink's self-proclaimed insight to create dramatic irony; the reader sees that her judgments are often hasty or based on incomplete information. This makes her a complex figure—both perceptive and fallible.
Music as Social Currency
Mrs. Lumbard is introduced as 'a very pretty woman who is a fine musician,' and her reputation 'all through the South' is tied to her musical talent. The automatic piano in the opening scene, playing 'The Virginia Blues,' contrasts sharply with the refined music associated with Mrs. Lumbard. Burnham uses these musical references to mark class and cultural differences. The cheap restaurant's mechanical music underscores Hugh's low status, while Mrs. Lumbard's cultivated skill suggests a more elevated sphere. Music also serves as a bridge between characters: Ogden's comment about the 'din into dinner' shows his wit, while Miss Frink's lack of musical references aligns her with practicality rather than artistry. The novel thus employs music as a shorthand for character and social position.
Readers attentive to the novel's structure will notice how Burnham builds meaning through repetition—of names, of settings, of objects like letters and pianos. The story does not unfold in a straight line but circles back to earlier clues, rewarding careful observation. Pay particular attention to the moments when characters pause, reflect, or react to a name or a piece of news; these are the hinges on which the plot turns. The novel's power lies not in dramatic action but in the quiet accumulation of detail.
There’s a quiet ache in Hugh’s story, that sense of coming home and still feeling lost, which reminded me of another book I’ve carried with me since—In Red and Gold — A Reader’s Guide. It traces similar footsteps through memory and small rooms. Some stories don’t leave you quickly; they just settle, like dust on a piano lid.
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